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Verse one:


The sunlight gleaming your hair,

I feel the music in the air,

Your lips they form an exquisite song.

Oh but the words I do not hear,

I ask oh what is the deal,

you say that you don't feel like singing right now.



Pre chorus:


Is there something I can do?


Just for you to sing a tune?


I'm at the edge my seat.

Once I hear your voice I'll be complete!!!!



Chorus:



I'd cross the desert and the sea,

Just for you to sing for me,


Don't keep me waiting.

NANANANANANA Just sing.

Just let the music ring.

And sing to me.





Verse two:


I've already got the lyrics down,

The acoustic strums for you now,

But still you sit there, with no sound.

I'm standing there in anticipation.

Just one note and elation,

would still stay up and never drown


Pre verse:


Is there something I can do,

Oh just tell me what to do,

My patience its gone I can't for long for you!!!





Chorus





Bridge:





NANANANA,  If I could ask for just one thing,

I would just wan't you to sing.


NANANANANA   

So please,


Is there a password,

an open sesame,

To hear the unheard.

So please,

Is there some sort of key,


To get you to sing.


SING


Chorus x4

Fade out.
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OOOOHHH THIS ONE ISN'T MY BEST!!!


I'm so nervous what you guys might think.
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:iconslenderman8maze:
I like it It seems catchy in my head.
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~kiki5764 Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good!

Do you think you can name it?
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:iconslenderman8maze:
Ummm...Sing for me?
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~kiki5764 Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good enough.
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Mood: Love ~aangozai Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow, this one really is your best untill now :o youre good at songwriting :D its a pity i cant hear the melody
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~kiki5764 Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I might be able to get a youtube account soon,

Maybe if I do I can post some of my songs with some guitar.

Would you listen if I did?
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Mood: Joy ~aangozai Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
of course i would :o if you tell me when youve done it :3 you play guitar?! so cool...
you should draw yourself in k-on! style sometime should be amazing :D
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~kiki5764 Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sure I'll try,

Hey thanks for supporting me bro,

I appreciate it.
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~Saiyen-Girl Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOVE!

and you could call it 'lose your voice' or something idk lol
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~kiki5764 Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
But I'm trying to GET her to sing....

Good title though, Might use it for another song.
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