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Verse one:

A playful whisper, of innocence thats gone,

How could of I messed this up? and be this way for so long.

Was it summer? When the world began to go bleak?

That caused me to make others suffer, and me to spiral down so deep.



Pre verse:


Well its hard to say,

When your life quickly wastes away,

Wishing you take back all the things you didn't mean to say.



Chorus:


But I have learned, To live with my mistakes.

I won't the easy way again,

What life throws I will take.

And it might hurt, it might burn.

But I know I'm not the first one,

so now its my turn.

Don't please hate me,

For changing so quickly.

But I know when enough's enough.



Verse 2:


Words so wounding, Playing like a sad song.

But I don't turn it off I listen, these words aren't always wrong.

And I know i'm hurting, hoping someone will hear.

And I know I don't deserve it but, I hope that you'll be near.



Pre chorus:


You can walk away,

But I hope you'll forgive me and stay.

But if you leave,

To punish me.

That would be okay.


Chorus


Bridge:




Don't please don't hate me,

Its not my fault I don't feel free.

And I know its so suddenly.

I just need you to need me!


Chorus


I'd love you if I loved enough.....
:iconkiki5764:
Another old song.


I'm going to be uploading a lot of these.

Maybe even (gasp)

New songs!
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~5SilverFingers Dec 1, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm starting to see your own particular style of songwriting. :) And it's neat. I like seeing a person's own way of writing come out.

This lyric had me confused for just bit, but then I figured it out. :D Nice job! If you ever want critique, just ask. :)
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~kiki5764 Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Kay thank you!!!


You may not know this,

But your input helps a lot!!!!
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~5SilverFingers Dec 1, 2012  Student General Artist
You're very welcome!

And I'm glad to be a help! I love songwriting, and I like learning and helping new people.
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